Is this sentence natural and correct?

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Is this sentence natural and correct?
"In my dream, I saw myself who was going to kill myself."
 

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No, it isn't. It's not clear what you are trying to say.
 

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May s/he mean 'I dreamt that I was going to kill myself'?
 

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English4everyone, you have been member long enough to know that a better title would have been In my dream...

'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'
 

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If you want to use "myself" after "saw", you could say something like "In my dream, I saw myself preparing to commit suicide".
 
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English4everyone, you have been member long enough to know that a better title would have been In my dream...

'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'
Yes, That's right. I'm sorry. I promise I will keep it in mind.
 
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