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Slinky

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First of all, I’m not a huge fan of wasting my energy and time when I can learn or gain a new skill. During a beautiful and warm day, I must go outside and enjoy the day. For me, this is a moment where I can be alone and think about what I should do during the next week and this is a good physical exercise. With a positive forecast, I will go outside as much as possible because the summer is short in Quebec. After 3 months, the weather is more cold and the days are shorter.
During a raining day, this is where I turn on my comfy mode. I will start with 2 questions to kick off my mindset. What I should do when it’s raining. These days are perfect for me to watch my favorite TV show on Netflix, Write or play video games. For instance, right now I just start watching House of Cards and this is my favorite show at the moment. And even today, all of these TV show on Netflix are interesting and I always appreciate when they create a good story with a content base on real facts. Also, I like to clean the house and put every objet at the right place (Kind of weird I know). Second question, why it doesn’t matter. I will point out that I’m not lazy and I always work to do my homework before the final day. I can take a rest without any problem and I will reach the goal. I can enjoy my leisure and get comfy instead of working on a project because I was lazy a week ago. I am an easygoing person when I don’t have pressure at all. I will watch Netflix a whole day and I know this is awful but I like doing that. However, I still need to watch the whole TV show in a week and I can’t watch an episode every week. I just can’t wait and I want to know the whole story quick. Overall, It’s important to have a good balance in life – If not we will have an unsuitable life and I believe we are all wise human to spend the right amount of time on each activity.

Where I can improve or made a mistake?
 

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First of all, I’m not a huge fan of wasting my energy and time on strenuous physical exercise when I can learn or gain a new skill. [STRIKE]During[/STRIKE] On a beautiful and warm day, I must go outside and enjoy the day. For me, this is a moment where I can be alone and think about what I should do during the [STRIKE]next[/STRIKE] coming week, and this, for me, is a good [STRIKE]physica[/STRIKE]l exercise. [STRIKE]With a positive forecast[/STRIKE] On such days, I will go outside as much as possible because the summer is short in Quebec. It lasts less than [STRIKE]After[/STRIKE] 3 months, after which the weather [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] inevitably gets [STRIKE]more[/STRIKE] colder and the days [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] shorter.

[STRIKE]During a raining day, this is where[/STRIKE] On rainy days I turn on my comfy mode. I will start with 2 questions to kick off my mindset. Firstly, I think about what I should do when it’s raining. These days are perfect for me to watch my favorite TV show on Netflix, write or play video games. For instance, right now I just started watching House of Cards, and this is my favorite show at the moment. And even today, all of these TV shows on Netflix are interesting, and I always appreciate when they create a good story [STRIKE]with a content[/STRIKE] based on real facts. Also, I like to clean the house and put every object [STRIKE]at[/STRIKE] in the right place (kind of weird I know). As for the second question, why it doesn’t matter. I will point out that I’m not lazy and I always [STRIKE]work to do[/STRIKE] finish my homework before the deadline. [STRIKE]final day.[/STRIKE] I can take a rest [STRIKE]without any problem[/STRIKE] and still get the job done without any problems. [STRIKE]will reach the goal.[/STRIKE] I can enjoy my leisure and get comfy instead of working on a project from the previous week. [STRIKE]because I was lazy a week ago.[/STRIKE] I am an easygoing person when not under pressure. [STRIKE]I don’t have pressure at all.[/STRIKE] I will watch Netflix the whole day, and I know this is awful, but I like doing that. [STRIKE]However, I still need to[/STRIKE] In fact, I often watch [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] whole TV shows in a week, [STRIKE]and I can’t[/STRIKE] as I'm too impatient to watch just one episode a [STRIKE]an episode every[/STRIKE] week. I just can’t wait, and I want to know the whole story quickly. Overall, It’s important to have a good balance in life, [STRIKE]– If not we will have an unsuitable life[/STRIKE] and I believe we are all wise [STRIKE]human[/STRIKE] enough to spend the right amount of time on each activity.
 

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Thanks for this feedback! I have a lot of work to do
 

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You're welcome Slinky. In the future, there's no need to write a separate post to say thank you.
Just click the Thank/Like button if you want to show your appreciation.
;-)
 
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