"Happiness is a direction and not a place./..., not a place."

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Odessa Dawn

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Happiness is a direction and not a place.
Happiness is a direction, not a place.

Sydney J. Harris

Is the second (better written/written better?) than the first regarding the punctuation?
 

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They are both correctly punctuated.
They are both punctuated correctly.
 

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As a sentence, I prefer the second.
 
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