I need help

[tedmc]

We undertake painting jobs/contracts for commercial and residential buildings.

You say you paint buildings, not paint properties.

 

[Matthew Wai]

'For two decades, our family-owned business has specialized in interior and exterior painting, including that for commercial and residential buildings.'

Not a teacher.

 

[Pleasehelpme!]

I like that Matthew wait but I also need a short description to go with it what do you think would be a good short description

 

[emsr2d2]

I like that, Matthew [STRIKE]wait[/STRIKE] Wai, but I also need a short description to go with it. What do you think would be a good short description?

Note my corrections above. Make sure you use correct capitalisation and punctuation in your posts.

 

[Pleasehelpme!]

I need help thinking of a good short description to go with this. 'For two decades, our family-owned business has specialized in interior and exterior painting, including that for commercial and residential buildings. For a Facebook page.

 

[Pleasehelpme!]

I need a larger description so could anyone help me make one using the key notes below . Two decades of experience. Specializing in interior and exterior panting . We paint both commercial and residential buildings and homes. We service the nashvile and surrounding areas . We are dependable and professional. Inglish isn't my first language so I really need help

 

[emsr2d2]

Inglish isn't my first language so I really need help

It's not my first language either. Nor is it the first language of anyone here. Nor is it a language.

 

[Pleasehelpme!]

For over two decades, our family-owned business has specialized in interior and exterior painting, including that for commercial and residential buildings. Changing your life may start as simply as changing the color of your kitchen!
Reliable paint professionals are waiting to work with you! We have been making colorful changes in the lives of people just like you for over 22 years! Commercial or residential, big or small, we do it all! Call us to arrange your free estimate. Start your change today! We service Nashville and surrounding areas.


Is there anything wrong with the grammar or wording of this sentences? Any edits are welcome.

 

[Matthew Wai]

We have been making colorful changes in the lives of people just like you for over 22 years!

Would it be misconstrued as 'We have been making colorful changes in the lives of people just like you have been making colorful changes in the lives of people for over 22 years'?

 

[MikeNewYork]

Matthew, where is the "not a teacher" statement?

 

[Matthew Wai]

My previous post was obviously a question instead of an answer, so I thought 'Not a teacher' was optional. Was I wrong?

 

[MikeNewYork]

It seemed like a suggestion to me, but I could be wrong.

 

[Barb_D]

Do not end all your statements with exclamation marks! They aren't needed all the time! They make your writing unnatural!

See what I mean?

 

[tedmc]

We have been making colorful changes in the lives of people just like you for over 22 years!

Isn't it a bit far-fetched to say that changing the colours of one's kitchen or house would change one's life?

Should it be "making colourful changes in/to the lives of people"?