starsyph
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- Joined
- Oct 29, 2015
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- United States
- Current Location
- United States
I'm applying for magnet schools, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Here's the question and my essay. I'm not quite done, as I am, for lack of better word, stuck. Thank you for reading my essay!
Please describe yourself as you study, work, and interact in your favorite class or activity related to the focus of the Science, Mathematics, Computer Science program.
I see myself working in front of a computer, lines of colorful code running through the screen. Although it may seem like nonsense, there is a meaning behind each of the words and symbols, although they may not seem obvious at first. This is the nature of all work and life itself. An assignment, at first glance may seem confusing, but once you read it through and piece it together, the meaning is much more obvious.
When I problem solve, I untangle each problem and break it down until I can solve each little problem to come up with a solution. Knowledge is boundless like the ocean, and I am sailing in it, navigating through waters stormy or clear. The pursuit of knowledge may be a daunting one, but I am fully prepared to face this challenge. When I work, I face this challenge everyday. When I often cannot find an answer at home, I regularly look things up, and immerse myself in the articles of Wolfram Alpha. In a school environment, I may ask my peers when allowed, and this is greatly useful, as I can see not only as I have interpreted the code, but how my colleagues have as well.
Here's the question and my essay. I'm not quite done, as I am, for lack of better word, stuck. Thank you for reading my essay!
Please describe yourself as you study, work, and interact in your favorite class or activity related to the focus of the Science, Mathematics, Computer Science program.
I see myself working in front of a computer, lines of colorful code running through the screen. Although it may seem like nonsense, there is a meaning behind each of the words and symbols, although they may not seem obvious at first. This is the nature of all work and life itself. An assignment, at first glance may seem confusing, but once you read it through and piece it together, the meaning is much more obvious.
When I problem solve, I untangle each problem and break it down until I can solve each little problem to come up with a solution. Knowledge is boundless like the ocean, and I am sailing in it, navigating through waters stormy or clear. The pursuit of knowledge may be a daunting one, but I am fully prepared to face this challenge. When I work, I face this challenge everyday. When I often cannot find an answer at home, I regularly look things up, and immerse myself in the articles of Wolfram Alpha. In a school environment, I may ask my peers when allowed, and this is greatly useful, as I can see not only as I have interpreted the code, but how my colleagues have as well.
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