[Essay] Please check the given introductory paragraph

[Faisal Marri]

Punctuality is the virtue of bored

Punctuality is not the virtue of bored. It is the strength of civilized and cultured people. Punctuality has a great value in human life. Someone has rightly said that time and tide wait for none, Those who consider punctuality the virtue of bored remain behind in life. They are not able to upgrade their standard of living. People leave them behind and they are forgotten forever. Time values those who respect it. No one can reach the height of glory without punctuality. Punctuality is the virtue of great leaders. It fulfills a man's life with satisfaction and happiness. It is rightly said that a stitch in time saves nine. A punctual person. completes his work in time. He faces disturbances in life. He comes up-to the expectations of people. A punctual person can become an ideal manager So, punctuality is the virtue of successful people.

 

[Tarheel]

Punctuality is the virtue of the bored.

Apparently, the writer of that sentence thinks that bored people have only one virtue.

Punctuality is not the virtue of the bored. It is the strength of civilized and cultured people. Punctuality has a great value in human life. Someone has rightly said that time and tide wait for none.Those who consider punctuality the virtue of the bored remain behind in life. They are not able to upgrade their standard of living. People leave them behind and they are forgotten forever. Time values those who respect it. No one can reach the heights of glory if he lacks the virtue of punctuality. Punctuality is the virtue of great leaders. It fulfills a man's life with satisfaction and happiness. It is rightly said that a stitch in time saves nine. A punctual person completes his work on time. He faces disturbances in life. He comes up-to the expectations of people. A punctual person can become an ideal manager. Punctuality is a virtue of successful people.

A punctual person gets to work on time, gets to meetings on time, and is dependable. But as for completing his work on time, that's not always under his control. He might have been given too much work and not enough time to finish it.