[Essay] Queries email to the University

[Aisha1103]

Greetings,

I need to send an enqueries email to the university that i wish to attend. Please help me for correcting any grammar and writing mistakes.
Dear Sir or Madam,


I am now at my high school's final year and i wish to attend International Foundation Diploma at the University (university name). I need a lot information about the programme, so please answer my questions below :


- What are the entry requirements for the student from Indonesia?

- How much tuition fees for the programme? Are they included additional fees such as module, enrollment fee, student ID card, etc?

- Do i guarenteed for a place on the Undegraduate degree after i finished the program?

- How much fees for living in campus accomodation? Are they included additional fees such as TV License, laundry, or even arrival and leaving fees?

- Approximately, how much living costs for living in (city name)?

- How is about Moslem facilities in the city? Where i can found places for prayer places and Halal foods?


Thank you.


Best Regards,

(My Name)


Thank you for your consideration.

 

[teechar]

Greetings,

I need to send an [STRIKE]enqueries[/STRIKE] email to the university that I wish to attend. Please help me [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] by correcting any grammar and writing mistakes.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am [STRIKE]now at my high school's[/STRIKE] in my final year of high school, and I wish to [STRIKE]attend[/STRIKE] apply for the International Foundation Diploma at the University of ABC (university name). I would appreciate [STRIKE]need a lot information about the programme, so please answer my[/STRIKE] if you can answer the following questions: [STRIKE]below :[/STRIKE]


- What are the entry requirements for [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] students from Indonesia?

- How much are the tuition fees for the programme? Are [STRIKE]they included[/STRIKE] there any additional fees or charges, such as for special modules, enrollment fees, student ID card fees, etc?

- [STRIKE]Do i[/STRIKE] Am I guaranteed [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] a place [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] in the undergraduate degree course after I finish [STRIKE]ed[/STRIKE] the foundation program?

- How much are the fees for living in campus accommodation? [STRIKE]Are they included additional fees[/STRIKE] Do they include charges such as TV license or laundry charges? [STRIKE], or even arrival and leaving fees?[/STRIKE]

- Approximately, [STRIKE]how much[/STRIKE] what are the monthly living costs for living in (city name)?

- [STRIKE]How is about Moslem[/STRIKE] Are there Muslim facilities in the city? Where [STRIKE]i can found[/STRIKE] can I find places to pray [STRIKE]for prayer[/STRIKE] and places [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] to eat Halal food?


Thank you, and my best regards,

(My Name)


Thank you for your consideration.

I didn't know what you meant by "arrival and leaving fees."

 

[Aisha1103]

Thank you based on what i read on the websites or prospectuses, some universities put charge when students arriving or leaving accomodation. Maybe for administration purpose? or welcome service? i don't know.

 

[teechar]

Can you provide a link to an example of that please? ;-)

 

[emsr2d2]

Aisha1103, please remember that you must capitalise the word "I" every time you write it.