Witk
New member
- Joined
- Dec 17, 2015
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Thai
- Home Country
- Thailand
- Current Location
- Thailand
could you help rewrite this sentence more naturaly and correctly. I need to show this sentence on webpage so, i need you all ensure me that it's the right for annoucement in public. (ps. i have changed some of information for privacy)
" arit is an Architect .
He Graduated with a Faculty of Architecture bachelor degree from Kaset University
in 2014. After that, He has been working with institute of the arts in bamboo
architect section .
He join the Boho hill project since August 2014 and is responsible for the Meditation
cluster of Boho hill. He is also designing the Meditation hall building.
Nowadays , bamboo architecture is the alternative choice for sustainable living and
the building in this project is created from bamboo and earth.Therefore, this project is worth to join."
thank you very much :-D:-D:-D:-D
witk
" arit is an Architect .
He Graduated with a Faculty of Architecture bachelor degree from Kaset University
in 2014. After that, He has been working with institute of the arts in bamboo
architect section .
He join the Boho hill project since August 2014 and is responsible for the Meditation
cluster of Boho hill. He is also designing the Meditation hall building.
Nowadays , bamboo architecture is the alternative choice for sustainable living and
the building in this project is created from bamboo and earth.Therefore, this project is worth to join."
thank you very much :-D:-D:-D:-D
witk