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Hello guys,This is my essay about the benefits of reading books. I'd like to know my possible English mistakes along with corrections. Please help me out. Thanks!

Reading books can give you many advantageous benefits. Firstly, reading books can help you widen your knowledge. As you know, books come in various types, sizes and styles. Each book is specialized in a certain something and tries to convey a certain amount of knowledge. The more you read, the more you will able to gain knowledge, the more you will be able to understand the world and the more you will be knowledgeable. You can also clearly see the usefulness and helpfulness of reading books as you read more books; it may help you in your work, your profession and even your daily life. Secondly, reading books help you improve your languages and communiciation skills. When you read a well written novel or story, you will be able to pick up new words that you have never seen before, thus enriching your vocabulary. You will feel more confident with yourself as your literature skills are improved. That means your writing skills and your speaking skills will definitely benefit from your reading books. You will become more creative with your things and speak your languages more fluently, and your social skills with improve. Especially if you are studying foreign languages, this will be bound to become a great aid. Thirdly, reading books helps you relax. It's definitely a great type of entertainment; it's light, portable, and you can bring it everywhere. You can read books in your leisure time to relieve your fatigue and stress from work. Reading books is also good for you to create laughter; you read a funny book or story, you laugh sometimes and you will feel very relaxed. There may be more, but it should be essential for you to develop a good habit of reading books (especially when you are young) so that you can get to enjoy all possible benefits from reading books to the fullest.
 
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Is this meant to be an assignment to be submitted to your teacher?

I would not use these phrases:

advantageous benefits
specialised in a certain something
usefulness and helpfulness in reading books
become creative with your things
bound to become a great aid
good for you to create laughter
it should be essential
 

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