Morbie
Member
- Joined
- Mar 27, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Hebrew
- Home Country
- Moldova
- Current Location
- Israel
Re: Jack and Nancy
Tarheel
Thank you so much (again) for your suggestions and tips, I really appreciate it (again) !
By the way, he was surprised because he didn't think she would refuse to dine in a 5 star restaurant hehe... I guess if he had known women better he wouldn't have been that surprised.
Additionally, you suggested I replace "started planning" to just "planned". Is "started planning" wrong? Is it unnatural? That's actually one of the few things I thought I had written correctly hehe.
Thanks Again
Tarheel
Thank you so much (again) for your suggestions and tips, I really appreciate it (again) !
By the way, he was surprised because he didn't think she would refuse to dine in a 5 star restaurant hehe... I guess if he had known women better he wouldn't have been that surprised.
Additionally, you suggested I replace "started planning" to just "planned". Is "started planning" wrong? Is it unnatural? That's actually one of the few things I thought I had written correctly hehe.
Thanks Again