Bambi31
New member
- Joined
- Jun 26, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Polish
- Home Country
- Poland
- Current Location
- Japan
Hello!
Could someone please correct the following text for me?
It's supposed to be my cover letter + description of my past job.
Any help would be appreciated.
Thank you
I am applying for a job in your company, because I want to work in a education field and more specifically I want to teach English. I have experience of teaching Japanese in a Japanese language school and I had also taught it numerous times on private lessons. Currently I am working part time in English language school. I am passionate about teaching. Until now I have taught children and adults alike and it was always a pleasure and stimulus for to me to able to convey the intricacies and also the fun and more tricky aspects of the foreigner language to my students. I hope to able to continue my journey of spreading love for foreign languages to many people.
I graduated high school in 2004 and in 2007 I acquired bachelor's degree in Cultural Studies of Far East. In 2011 I entered master studies of Japanese Philology and next year 2012 I got scholarship from MEXT and studied at Ochanomizu Joshi Daigaku for 1 year. After coming back I finished my master studies and in 2015 I graduated with master diploma.
I acquired TOEIC certificate in April 2013 with the score of 885
From 2004 until 2015 I worked as a full time worker in Orion company which produces Christmas ornaments. My main responsibility was managing English-Polish mail correspondence and translating English documents. Once a year when the client came from America to Poland for review of products I was responsible for oral translations. Also, I frequently checked the quality of products in their final stage of development.
Could someone please correct the following text for me?
It's supposed to be my cover letter + description of my past job.
Any help would be appreciated.
Thank you
I am applying for a job in your company, because I want to work in a education field and more specifically I want to teach English. I have experience of teaching Japanese in a Japanese language school and I had also taught it numerous times on private lessons. Currently I am working part time in English language school. I am passionate about teaching. Until now I have taught children and adults alike and it was always a pleasure and stimulus for to me to able to convey the intricacies and also the fun and more tricky aspects of the foreigner language to my students. I hope to able to continue my journey of spreading love for foreign languages to many people.
I graduated high school in 2004 and in 2007 I acquired bachelor's degree in Cultural Studies of Far East. In 2011 I entered master studies of Japanese Philology and next year 2012 I got scholarship from MEXT and studied at Ochanomizu Joshi Daigaku for 1 year. After coming back I finished my master studies and in 2015 I graduated with master diploma.
I acquired TOEIC certificate in April 2013 with the score of 885
From 2004 until 2015 I worked as a full time worker in Orion company which produces Christmas ornaments. My main responsibility was managing English-Polish mail correspondence and translating English documents. Once a year when the client came from America to Poland for review of products I was responsible for oral translations. Also, I frequently checked the quality of products in their final stage of development.