I think I have read this phrase in a book.Where did you find "predetermined goals"?
Ah this is my mistake. Thanks for your suggestionYou need to change some things. Say that she was competing for a gold medal, not that she had won a gold medal. If she had already won a gold medal she would not have had any matches left.
Thanks for your recommendations. Your sentences are way clearer than mine. I think I need to work more on expressing my thoughts. Might you give me some advice or some book/materials that I could improve?Perhaps:
Suddenly she landed a devastating right cross to her opponent's chin. The girl crumpled to the canvas, landing with a thud. A knockout! The match was over, and she had won!
Now it's time for applause.