sofiarica94
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The text in bold was corrected by my teacher. I will be very pleased if you could point out any more mistakes. Thank you in advance!
Nowadays, it is a well-established fact that a [STRIKE]huge[/STRIKE] large number of countries suffer from poverty. Among the different reasons that explain why they are in such a trouble, wars are arguably the most important one, followed by [STRIKE]economical[/STRIKE] economic recessions . Likewise, a lack of resources can affect negatively [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] these countries. Despite the fact that the causes of entering situations of misery and big poverty are well known, the solutions are not as clear as it was expected to be.
First of all, It is common knowledge that, since escaping from this situation is not a piece of cake, poor countries ask for help to rich ones. However, there are different points of view on whether [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] this is a good solution or not.
On the one hand, there are people who believe that poor countries have to get out of [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] poverty by themselves. Those people think that this is the responsibility of the country’s government to deal with it. They also consider that if poor countries have debts with wealthy countries they have to pay them as soon as possible.
On the other hand, fortunately, there is another side of the coin. There are other people who think that when it is needed, wealthy countries should provide the poorer ones with the basic needs. This way, little by little poor countries would recover their regular levels of food, healthcare, education, goods and services. In addition, they believe that rich countries can forgive debts from poor countries until the latter [STRIKE]get[/STRIKE] have recovered from poverty.
From my honest opinion, wealthy countries should lend a helping hand to poorer countries so as to help them to recover. From my own knowledge, it is important to bear in mind the expression "what goes around comes around". Today, there are people who are way too close-minded and do not [STRIKE]think out of the box[/STRIKE] think outside the box but [STRIKE]they[/STRIKE] just [STRIKE]think[/STRIKE] for their own sake. If I could, I would like to tell them that, if one day their country were in poverty, they would like to have support from others. Everyone deserves a good level of life and as far as I am concerned, if I had the opportunity to help others, I would act properly cooperating with good measures and helping them as much as possible.
Nowadays, it is a well-established fact that a [STRIKE]huge[/STRIKE] large number of countries suffer from poverty. Among the different reasons that explain why they are in such a trouble, wars are arguably the most important one, followed by [STRIKE]economical[/STRIKE] economic recessions . Likewise, a lack of resources can affect negatively [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] these countries. Despite the fact that the causes of entering situations of misery and big poverty are well known, the solutions are not as clear as it was expected to be.
First of all, It is common knowledge that, since escaping from this situation is not a piece of cake, poor countries ask for help to rich ones. However, there are different points of view on whether [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] this is a good solution or not.
On the one hand, there are people who believe that poor countries have to get out of [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] poverty by themselves. Those people think that this is the responsibility of the country’s government to deal with it. They also consider that if poor countries have debts with wealthy countries they have to pay them as soon as possible.
On the other hand, fortunately, there is another side of the coin. There are other people who think that when it is needed, wealthy countries should provide the poorer ones with the basic needs. This way, little by little poor countries would recover their regular levels of food, healthcare, education, goods and services. In addition, they believe that rich countries can forgive debts from poor countries until the latter [STRIKE]get[/STRIKE] have recovered from poverty.
From my honest opinion, wealthy countries should lend a helping hand to poorer countries so as to help them to recover. From my own knowledge, it is important to bear in mind the expression "what goes around comes around". Today, there are people who are way too close-minded and do not [STRIKE]think out of the box[/STRIKE] think outside the box but [STRIKE]they[/STRIKE] just [STRIKE]think[/STRIKE] for their own sake. If I could, I would like to tell them that, if one day their country were in poverty, they would like to have support from others. Everyone deserves a good level of life and as far as I am concerned, if I had the opportunity to help others, I would act properly cooperating with good measures and helping them as much as possible.
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