Is "beautiful enough to deserve my love" correct?

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nouka

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Hello guys

i wanted to say that she is very beautiful and got my love, in short can i say "beautiful enough to deserve my love"? Or maybe there's another way of saying that.

Thanks:-o
 

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Hello [STRIKE]guys[/STRIKE] everyone. (Although it's not incorrect as such, referring to everyone here as "guys" technically excludes all our female members.)

I [STRIKE]wanted[/STRIKE] want to say that she is very beautiful and got my love. In short, can I say "beautiful enough to deserve my love" (no question mark here) or is there maybe [STRIKE]there's[/STRIKE] another way of saying [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] it?

Thanks. [STRIKE]:-o[/STRIKE]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

First, please note my corrections above.

The fragment you have posted is grammatically correct and seems to say what you want to. It would be helpful if you gave us a complete sentence to consider.
 

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Delarno, please read this extract from the Forum Guidelines:


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