Photography Business Letter US-English

[Davidns]

Hi Smith,

ABC Real Estate Photo & Video as Napa’s leading studio in luxury real estate marketing, offers
following exclusive services to top real estate agents.

- Professional Editorial HD photography
- Cinematic Full-HD Video
- Feature Sheets
- Aerial Drone photo/video
- Listing Website /Media Gallery
- Agent’s website
- Twilight/Dusk photography
- Floor Plans
- Matterport 3D Walk-Through
- Agents Headshot
- Voice over video


To test ABC Photo & Video’s effectiveness in your marketing, you can arrange a free no-obligation
trial now for your first project. If you need any additional information, please contact us at
123-456-789 or email@address.com

Regards,
David, Principal Photographer

 

[teechar]

Hello Davidns, and welcome to the forum.
Would you please correct the information on your profile page first?

 

[teechar]

[STRIKE]Hi[/STRIKE] Dear Mr Smith,

ABC Real Estate Photo & Video, as Napa’s leading studio in luxury real-estate marketing, offers the following exclusive services to top real estate agents.

- Professional editorial HD photography
- Cinematic full-HD video
- Feature sheets
- Aerial drone photo/video
- [STRIKE]Listing[/STRIKE] Website listing/media gallery
- Agent’s website
- Twilight/dusk photography
- Floor plans
- Matterport 3D walk-through
- Agent headshot
- Voice-over video


To test ABC Photo & Video’s effectiveness in your marketing, you can arrange a free no-obligation trial now for your first project. If you need any additional information, please contact us at
123-456-789 or email@address.com

Regards,
David Lee,

Principal Photographer

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[bubbha]

If it's US English, it should start like this:

Dear Mr. Smith:

Note the period after "Mr." and the colon at the end. In the US, a comma is used with friends, relatives, Santa Claus, and other people you have an informal or familiar relationship with, but in a business letter or other formal correspondence, you should use a colon.

 

[emsr2d2]

Note that a colon is never used that way in a formal letter in BrE.