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Born in ………. in…………... She started playing cello at the age of 8 by…………. She completed (with distinction) the elite Zenon Brzewski General Music School, Warsaw, and then, her Bachelor’s degree studies in Fryderyk Chopin University, Warsaw under the direction of Professor …………. Between 2014 and 2016 she continued studying in Geneva University of Music by prof…………. Currently, she is a student in the Hochschule der Künste Bern under the tutelage of Professors ……………and …………..

She is a laureate and a prize winner in numerous national and international competitions including: the 2[SUP]nd[/SUP] Cello Competition in Warsaw, Poland (2[SUP]nd[/SUP] prise); the nation-wide audition organised by the Center for Arts Education in Warsaw (1[SUP]st[/SUP] prise); the Zdzisława Wojciechowska Poland-wide Cello Audition in Bydgoszcz, Poland (1[SUP]st[/SUP] prise); the 6[SUP]th[/SUP] Nation-wide Forum of Young Instrumentalists in Rybnik (2[SUP]nd[/SUP] prise), the ‘Talent Week’ All-Poland Festival of Music Competition Laureates”, and also as a chamber musician, e.g. in the Swiss Chamber Music Competition in Bern (duet with the pianist,………..) and in the 1[SUP]st[/SUP] International Chamber Music Competition organized by Częstochowska Philharmonic, Poland (duet with the pianist,……………).

She has perfected her musical skills during numerous masterclasses conducted by prominent pedagogues such as: She was a multiple scholarship holder of the Stringtime NiederRhein in Goch (Germany) programme and a participant in Polish-Norway Academy of Young Musicians.

[h=3]She has performed as a soloist with the Symphony Orchestra of Philharmonic in Rzeszów conducted by ……………., Feel Harmony Orchestra directed by………….. and Zenon Brzewski Warsaw String Orchestra. Since 2014, she has taken part in numerous projects of the „Soloists de Neuchâtel” Orchestra in Switzerland directed by a prominent violin player Sergey Ostrovsky, where she chairs the cello section, giving concerts in the famous Geneva Victoria Hall among others.[/h]
Chamber music occupies a significant position in her music activity. She constantly cooperates with the pianist…………., forming ( name of the band). The artists intensively give concerts in Switzerland. Since 2016, they have also played with the violinist ……..name………and the viola player ………….

She was a multiple scholarship holder of the Children's Fund and the Minister of Culture and National Heritage proggrames. Her recent success is a prise during the audition organised by the Rahn Kulturfonds in Zurych.
 

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Hello! Are there any mistakes in the biography below? If anyone could check it, I would be grateful. :)

Born in Kraków, Poland, Marie Wałęsa started playing the cello at the age of 8 by…………. She [STRIKE]completed (with distinction)[/STRIKE] later graduated from the elite Zenon Brzewski General Music School in Warsaw with distinction, [STRIKE]Warsaw,[/STRIKE] and then completed her bachelor’s degree studies in Fryderyk Chopin University, Warsaw under the direction of Professor ………….

Between 2014 and 2016, she continued studying [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at the Geneva University of Music [STRIKE]by[/STRIKE] under prof…………. Currently, she is a student in the Hochschule der Künste, Bern under the tutelage of Professors ……………and …………..

She is a laureate and a prize winner in numerous national and international competitions including the 2[SUP]nd[/SUP] Cello Competition in Warsaw, Poland (2[SUP]nd[/SUP] prize); the nation-wide audition organised by the Center for Arts Education in Warsaw (1[SUP]st[/SUP] prize); the Zdzisława Wojciechowska Poland-wide Cello Audition in Bydgoszcz, Poland (1[SUP]st[/SUP] prize); the 6[SUP]th[/SUP] Nation-wide Forum of Young Instrumentalists in Rybnik (2[SUP]nd[/SUP] prize), the ‘Talent Week’ All-Poland Festival of Music Competition Laureates”, and also as a chamber musician, e.g. in the Swiss Chamber Music Competition in Bern (duet with the pianist,………..) and in the 1[SUP]st[/SUP] International Chamber Music Competition organized by Częstochowska Philharmonic, Poland (duet with the pianist,……………).

She has perfected her musical skills during numerous masterclasses conducted by prominent pedagogues such as [ ]. She [STRIKE]was a[/STRIKE] won multiple scholarships [STRIKE]holder of[/STRIKE] in the Stringtime NiederRhein in Goch (Germany) programme and [STRIKE]a participant[/STRIKE] worked/studied? at [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] the Polish-Norway Academy of Young Musicians.

She has performed as a soloist with the [STRIKE]Symphony Orchestra of[/STRIKE] Rzeszów Philharmonic Orchestra [STRIKE]in Rzeszów[/STRIKE] conducted by ……………., the Feel Harmony Orchestra directed by………….. and the Zenon Brzewski Warsaw String Orchestra. Since 2014, she has taken part in numerous projects of the Soloists de Neuchâtel Orchestra in Switzerland directed by the prominent violin player Sergey Ostrovsky, where she chairs the cello section, giving concerts in the famous Geneva Victoria Hall among others.


Chamber music occupies a significant position in her music activity, but she also [STRIKE]constantly cooperates[/STRIKE] works a lot with the pianist…………., [STRIKE]forming[/STRIKE] as a member of (name of the band). Together, they [STRIKE]artists intensively[/STRIKE] given numerous concerts in Switzerland. Since 2016, they have also played with the violinist ……..name………and the viola player ………….

[STRIKE]She was a multiple[/STRIKE] Maria won scholarships [STRIKE]holder of[/STRIKE] for the Children's Fund and the Minister of Culture and National Heritage programmes. Her recent success is a prise during the audition organised by the Rahn Kulturfonds in Zurych.

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by - her teacher was............
Her recent success is a prise - she's recently got a prize, and considers it her personal success ;-)
 

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by - her teacher was............
... started playing the cello at the age of 8; her teacher was James McCabe.


Her recent success is a prise - she's recently got a prize, and considers it her personal success ;-)
Recently, she won a prize during the audition organised by the Rahn Kulturfonds in Zurich.
 
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