QuanLe
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Hello everyone, this is my second essay, and I am practicing writing in English. Any comments are welcome. Please score my essay and correct it. Thanks.
In the summer of last year, my mother and I went to RRR city to take a vacation. First my mother and I went to my uncle’s house, his name is Dan and he was greeting to see us. At his room my mother and Dan talk about his affair, meanwhile I went to the beach to meet a girl, which one I had met on dating site.
Unfortunately at the beach I ran into my ex-girlfriend and her name is Anna, it was horrified. When I met her I was totally loss. I do not know what to say or what to do, so I try to treat her as a simple friend, we talk about job and some things but not important to us. About ten minutes after, my new girlfriend and Sweet is her name come to see us, Anna gave her a strange look and waste goodbye. Then Sweet gave me an angry look and went away, I saw that she was jealous of me and I try to give her some explanation. But it all seemed no point. A week after that I made over one hundred phone calls to Sweet but she did not answer, then my mother and I prepare for our journey back home, I was very sad and try to sleep on way home, it was very sad vacation I have ever had in my life. I did not know what to do to reach her. Please help me, if someone have any ideas please comments, I will grateful for your help.
PS: This is just a story to practice in English, please do not take it seriously. Let’s enjoy it and make comments.
In the summer of last year, my mother and I went to RRR city to take a vacation. First my mother and I went to my uncle’s house, his name is Dan and he was greeting to see us. At his room my mother and Dan talk about his affair, meanwhile I went to the beach to meet a girl, which one I had met on dating site.
Unfortunately at the beach I ran into my ex-girlfriend and her name is Anna, it was horrified. When I met her I was totally loss. I do not know what to say or what to do, so I try to treat her as a simple friend, we talk about job and some things but not important to us. About ten minutes after, my new girlfriend and Sweet is her name come to see us, Anna gave her a strange look and waste goodbye. Then Sweet gave me an angry look and went away, I saw that she was jealous of me and I try to give her some explanation. But it all seemed no point. A week after that I made over one hundred phone calls to Sweet but she did not answer, then my mother and I prepare for our journey back home, I was very sad and try to sleep on way home, it was very sad vacation I have ever had in my life. I did not know what to do to reach her. Please help me, if someone have any ideas please comments, I will grateful for your help.
PS: This is just a story to practice in English, please do not take it seriously. Let’s enjoy it and make comments.