rodgers white
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Hello, there. My students were asked to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of square dance and give their own opinions. And finally, I want to give them a possible version. Will someone, who is kind enough, check it and make some corrections and improvements? I really appreciate your help. The possible version goes as follows:
Nowadays, square dance is very popular in China. Many people exercise square dance every day and they become healthier than before now. They can also make more friends when they dance with others, so they enjoy it a lot. But some people think the music is too noisy for the children to do their homework. Sometimes people can't have a good sleep.
Of course square dance is a good activity for people to keep healthy, but they also need to turn down the music in order to keep our environment some quiet.
Nowadays, square dance is very popular in China. Many people exercise square dance every day and they become healthier than before now. They can also make more friends when they dance with others, so they enjoy it a lot. But some people think the music is too noisy for the children to do their homework. Sometimes people can't have a good sleep.
Of course square dance is a good activity for people to keep healthy, but they also need to turn down the music in order to keep our environment some quiet.
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