ohcamper
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- Feb 15, 2017
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- Turkish
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- Turkey
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- Turkey
Hello everyone i am new here
ı'm applying for somewhere but they keep rejecting my application due to the grammar mistakes. I checked it several times but what is the problem? Can you helpme please? Thank you. At least 150 words.
Hello, I am xxxx I was born in Ankara, Turkey in 1991, I graduated from the high school in Turkey. After a while, for some economical problems I moved in USA, Los Santos. I was 19 when I moved to LS, I worked as a bartender for a year. After that I worked as a private driver for about 4 years. When it's been 5 years in LS, I applied for the American Citizenship. After two months they called me and I passed the test. Now I am a valid American Citizen.
I can say that my personality, my hard working skills make me apply this job. For this job, you have to take some responsibilities and I can handle it easily because I am a responsible person. Since my childhood, I had a special care for the buses, cars, public service vehicles. Probably the reason is my father was a taxi driver, I was inspired by him. DoT is offering very decent working standards and I think I am meeting the requirements. If I am being accepted I will do my job with love aswell. And the most important thing is I had great driving skills. I am aware of that this is a serious job because even a little mistake can lead to death.
ı'm applying for somewhere but they keep rejecting my application due to the grammar mistakes. I checked it several times but what is the problem? Can you helpme please? Thank you. At least 150 words.
Hello, I am xxxx I was born in Ankara, Turkey in 1991, I graduated from the high school in Turkey. After a while, for some economical problems I moved in USA, Los Santos. I was 19 when I moved to LS, I worked as a bartender for a year. After that I worked as a private driver for about 4 years. When it's been 5 years in LS, I applied for the American Citizenship. After two months they called me and I passed the test. Now I am a valid American Citizen.
I can say that my personality, my hard working skills make me apply this job. For this job, you have to take some responsibilities and I can handle it easily because I am a responsible person. Since my childhood, I had a special care for the buses, cars, public service vehicles. Probably the reason is my father was a taxi driver, I was inspired by him. DoT is offering very decent working standards and I think I am meeting the requirements. If I am being accepted I will do my job with love aswell. And the most important thing is I had great driving skills. I am aware of that this is a serious job because even a little mistake can lead to death.
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