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    Lately, my company founder has been passed away and I have to create a message for him as a title called “A Tribute to Our Founder”. Can you please check whether my writing is grammatically good to go.


    This pioneering organization was started with a humble beginning by its founder Mr. XXX, He’s been highly versatile and conscientious character. He’s been the main steering wheel of this organization. He had a long time vision of making this organization to increasing heights which became true now. His multipronged and honest approach to clients made him on of the most trusted personality in human resource industry.

    CAREER DEVELOPMENT
    Started his career as a small manpower provider. For long years, he had seen a huge increase demand for foreign workers especially in the sectors like manufacturing, construction and plantations. His early adulthood experiences gave him the needed courage and confidence to expanded on a bigger scale.
    He learned all the procedures in processing and recruiting the foreign worker from overseas. He embedded with quarter century experience in the filed of overseas manpower supply. He’s been the TOP BRASS of this organization.

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    The sultan of Negeri Sembilan conferred the titles XXX in 1997 and XXX in 2004 for his outstanding contribution to the betterment of society.
    He was a member in Royal Selangor Club and Lions International.
    He has been travelled widely around the world and acquired rich experiences.
    Last edited by Gaya87; 18-Mar-2017 at 09:48.

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    Re: Company profile

    You need the past simple for that. Click the Edit button to modify your text accordingly.

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    Re: Company profile

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Lately, my The founder of the company I work in founder has been passed away recently, and I have to create a message write an obituary for him as a titled called “A Tribute to Our Founder”. Can you please check whether my writing is okay? grammatically good to go.


    This pioneering organization was which started with a from humble beginnings was established by its founder Mr. XXX. He’s been With his highly versatile and conscientious character, He’s been he was the mainstay steering wheel of this organization. He had a long-term time vision of making [NAME] a pioneer and a leader in the field of HR. this organization to increasing heights which became true now. His multi-pronged and honest approach to dealing with clients made him one of the most trusted personalities in the human resource HR industry in Malaysia.

    CAREER DEVELOPMENT
    Mr ABC started his career as a small manpower provider. For long Over the years, he had seen saw a huge increase in the demand for foreign workers, especially in the sectors like manufacturing, construction and plantations. He learned all the procedures involved in processing and recruiting the foreign workers from overseas, and his early adulthood experiences gave him the needed courage and confidence to expand the business. ed on a bigger scale.

    He embedded with quarter century experience in the filed of overseas manpower supply. He’s been the TOP BRASS of this organization.

    AWARDS & MEMBERSHIP
    The Sultan of Negeri Sembilan conferred upon him the titles XXX in 1997 and XXX in 2004 for his outstanding contributions to the betterment of society.
    He was a member in of the Royal Selangor Club and Lions International.
    He has been travelled widely around the world and acquired rich experience in doing so.
    Gaya87, please correct the information on your profile page!

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    Hi teechar,

    As you requested, I have edited the initially post to past simple tense.

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    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    Gaya87, please correct the information on your profile page!
    [NAME] a pioneer and a leader in the field of HR

    When you said (Name) that would be company name or founder's name?

    Can I rephrase the sentence as below:

    His multi-pronged and honest approach to dealing with clients made him one of the most trusted personalities in the Manpower industry in Malaysia.
    Last edited by Gaya87; 21-Mar-2017 at 02:57.

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    Gaya87, you have been asked more than once to correct the information on your profile. It appears that your current location is not India. Please correct it before asking any more questions.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Gaya87, you have been asked more than once to correct the information on your profile. It appears that your current location is not India. Please correct it before asking any more questions.
    Hi emsr2d2, I'm originally from India. But I'm used to travel Malaysia very often for a business trip since my company based in Malaysia. When I created this account I was in India, that's the only reason I stated my current Location as India. Do you still want me to change my current location?

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    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    Gaya87, please correct the information on your profile page!
    I'm sorry teechr, I misunderstood your comment. When you said correct the information on your profile, I assumed that you're expecting some feedback based on your correction. Basically, you've requested to edit my current location, right?

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    Right.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi emsr2d2, I'm originally from India. But I'm used to travel Malaysia very often for a business trip since my company based in Malaysia. When I created this account I was in India, that's the only reason I stated my current Location as India. Do you still want me to change my current location?
    The Current Location section of your profile should contain correct information at all times, even if that means changing it when you travel between countries. If you're only away on a short business trip, you should say that if asked. We keep a close watch on the claimed location and actual location of users in order to help identify spammers and trolls.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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