Need advice with sentence

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Koskos

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Hello to everyone!

I am not a native English speaker and now need some help with certain English sentences and frazes for the website I am working on.

The website is created to help small businessmen and entrepreneurs to make different calculations of product/service costs.

On the front page I want to use the key advertising sentence to explain to the user the main purpose of my website. In one short sentence I have I have to explain the following features:

a) it's a cloud-based technology of calculations process. User's projects are stored on secured cloud servers
b) user can make both costing and budgeting calculations
c) it's specially designed to meet the level of financial and economic competency of small businessman or entrepreneur

I came up with the following sentence:

"Cloud-based cost accounting and budgeting software for small and medium-sized businesses"

Does this sentence sound "ok" from the point of view of the native English speaker?

Thank you

Kos
 

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Yes. Well done.
 

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frazes :cross:
phrases :tick:

ok :cross:
OK :tick:
okay :tick:
 
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