Would you proofread my following writing?

[Cloudyrose]

Hi teachers,

Would you please proofread my following writing?

"Sharing and cooperation is a vital life skill. We are happy to learn that she shares and cooperate well with her classmates at school. We are also glad to see that she is engaged and interested in school hands-on science experiment. Thank you teachers for using difference teaching strategies and getting her excited about learning. As a parents, we also love to look for opportunities around us to capitalize on the educational to our kid in our everyday life. I think this is fun and can give her a better understanding of what she is learning."

Many thanks!

 

[emsr2d2]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

When are you going to submit your piece of writing to your teacher/tutor for grading or marking?

 

[Cloudyrose]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

When are you going to submit your piece of writing to your teacher/tutor for grading or marking?

Thank you I need by next Monday. I hope it could be done on this Saturday.

 

[bhaisahab]

After you have submitted it to your teacher, if you need any help with it, or the teacher's comments on it, you can repost it here.

 

[emsr2d2]

As you can see from bhaisahab's post, we can't help you before you submit it. It would be entirely unfair for you to submit work that you have not done by yourself. Your teacher needs to see your errors so that he/she can work out how to help you.

We don't help anyone with homework or assignments here.

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