ambitious-girl
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Is the following a good introduction for an essay with the topic " Do mobile phones have advantages or disadvantages"?
"The invention of the mobile phone has undoubtedly revolutionized the way in which people communicate and has influenced every aspect of our lives.
While some people believe that this technological innovation has done more harm than good, I would argue that their drawbacks are more than outweighed by obvious benefits."
"The invention of the mobile phone has undoubtedly revolutionized the way in which people communicate and has influenced every aspect of our lives.
While some people believe that this technological innovation has done more harm than good, I would argue that their drawbacks are more than outweighed by obvious benefits."