chunchuntthn
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Bob, a scholar, his main job studied about all kinds of bird. One day he met a sailor who was from a colony overseas. The sailor talked to Bob about a talking bird. Bob was very amazed and believed that it was real. A week later, he departed to the colony. He was on a ship to floated on the sea during a month. Finally, he reached to the colony where he met the sailor again.
The sailor was able to help Bob look for the bird. He said: “I can take you to a volcano, the bird lived near the volcano”. Next day, they departed to the volcano and one week later, they arrived at there. Bob and the sailor found (or looked for?) the bird everywhere, but there are not birds as the sailor had talked. This depressed Bob, on the route back, they walked past some ruins. Bob heard some one said: “Hello”. Bob looked around and saw a bird.
So Bob discovered the talking bird. Now, We called the talking bird "Parrot".
Bob, a scholar, his main job studied about all kinds of bird. One day he met a sailor who was from a colony overseas. The sailor talked to Bob about a talking bird. Bob was very amazed and believed that it was real. A week later, he departed to the colony. He was on a ship to floated on the sea during a month. Finally, he reached to the colony where he met the sailor again.
The sailor was able to help Bob look for the bird. He said: “I can take you to a volcano, the bird lived near the volcano”. Next day, they departed to the volcano and one week later, they arrived at there. Bob and the sailor found (or looked for?) the bird everywhere, but there are not birds as the sailor had talked. This depressed Bob, on the route back, they walked past some ruins. Bob heard some one said: “Hello”. Bob looked around and saw a bird.
So Bob discovered the talking bird. Now, We called the talking bird "Parrot".