A Tamil Movie: Thambi

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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A sister, who has been leading a humdrum life for more than a decade after her younger brother runs away from home, becomes excited after the latter's return. However, their lives witness a roller-coaster ride when the brother faces life threat from an unexpected person.

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Brother and sister who get separated and reunite years later when the brother has grown to be a criminal.
 

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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A [STRIKE]sister[/STRIKE] woman/lady, who has been leading a humdrum life for more than a decade [STRIKE]after[/STRIKE] since her younger brother [STRIKE]runs[/STRIKE] ran away from home, becomes excited after the latter's return. However, their lives [STRIKE]witness[/STRIKE] become a roller-coaster ride when the brother faces a threat to his life [STRIKE]threat[/STRIKE] from an unexpected person.

Short synopsis
A brother and sister who [STRIKE]get[/STRIKE] were separated [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] reunite years later when the brother has [STRIKE]grown to be[/STRIKE] become a criminal.

See above.
 

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I suggest:

A woman who has been living a humdrum life since her brother ran away from home becomes excited upon his return.
 

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Gaya, who has been closing your threads?
:?:
 

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The short synopsis is more exciting than the longer one.
 

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Gaya, who has been closing your threads? :?:

The OP has been away for about a year. Threads with no activity are automatically closed after a certain length of time (not sure how long) - I think that's what happened to the OP's previous threads.
 

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The OP has been away for about a year. Threads with no activity are automatically closed after a certain length of time (not sure how long) - I think that's what happened to the OP's previous threads.
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I didn't do anything. As emsr2d2 said, it's automatically closed.
 

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I think it's a six-month cutoff date. Anyone can ask for a thread to be re-opened, but it helps reduce spam and advertising.
 

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I think it's a six-month cutoff date. Anyone can ask for a thread to be re-opened, but it helps reduce spam and advertising.

So if I want to post something on a closed thread I should PM a mod? (When I was one I could open closed threads.)
 

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So if I want to post something on a closed thread I should PM a mod? (When I was one I could open closed threads.)

Yes.
 
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