Motivation Letter for Master's degree (scholarship)

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My passion for data science started when I took a short course at a computer institute in Thailand. I learned that data science is a powerful tool that can help businesses analyze. the mass of data that they deal with and to make decisions.

I don't know why you can't mention the name of the country. As for the school, don't they want people to know about them?

It's a draft letter.
 
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Because I had no background in the data area, I gained more experience with that with my previous companies and joined online classes from various websites.
 
If machine learning isn't capitalized there's no reason advanced machine learning would be.
 
Are you talking about capitalization?
 
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