[Essay] a beacon to me

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Ashiuhto

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Please help me corect the following redundant sentences.

When I fell down, he would always be there to give me a hand. When I got lost, he would always show me the right way. When I went astray, he was always a beacon to me.
 
There is nothing to correct. The writer is hammering home a point
 
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