A delayed Proposal email

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Narkises

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Hello,

What is your opinion about this email I've written. Thank you.


subj: A delayed Proposal

Hi,

Although being on time is a mean in research collaboration, my perfectionism doesn't let me stop reading some more related articles. I've read about 30 of them and still a few remain. I will send you a perfect proposal as soon as I master over all the related articles.

Kindest Regard,
 
Hello,

What is your opinion about this email I've written? Thank you.


Subj:The Delayed Proposal

[STRIKE] Hi,[/STRIKE]
Dear Dr Doolittle,

Although [STRIKE]being on time is a mean[/STRIKE] punctuality is important in research collaboration, my perfectionism doesn't [STRIKE]let[/STRIKE] allow me to stop reading some more related articles. I've read about 30 of them and still a few remain. I will send you a perfect proposal as soon as I [STRIKE]master[/STRIKE] cover all the related articles.

Kindest regard,
.
 
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I think the verb after "let" should be simple!!
Anyway, who is Doolittle?
 
And I really want to tell her "Hi". :roll:
 
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