A delayed Proposal email

[Narkises]

Hello,

What is your opinion about this email I've written. Thank you.


subj: A delayed Proposal

Hi,

Although being on time is a mean in research collaboration, my perfectionism doesn't let me stop reading some more related articles. I've read about 30 of them and still a few remain. I will send you a perfect proposal as soon as I master over all the related articles.

Kindest Regard,

 

[teechar]

Hello,

What is your opinion about this email I've written? Thank you.


Subj:The Delayed Proposal

[STRIKE] Hi,[/STRIKE]
Dear Dr Doolittle,

Although [STRIKE]being on time is a mean[/STRIKE] punctuality is important in research collaboration, my perfectionism doesn't [STRIKE]let[/STRIKE] allow me to stop reading some more related articles. I've read about 30 of them and still a few remain. I will send you a perfect proposal as soon as I [STRIKE]master[/STRIKE] cover all the related articles.

Kindest regard,

.

 

[Narkises]

I think the verb after "let" should be simple!!
Anyway, who is Doolittle?

 

[Narkises]

And I really want to tell her "Hi". :roll:

 

[teechar]

I think the verb after "let" should be a bare infinitive. [STRIKE]simple![/STRIKE]

I meant to write "allow"; it's fixed now.

Anyway, who is Doolittle?

It's just an example.

And I really want to tell her "Hi". :roll:

Have you done that before? Are you already on first-name basis with that person?