[General] ...a good time...

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rodgers white

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For me, poetry is an art form that allows the artist to combine both poetry and a visual work of art within a single art piece. Words and paintings are a perfect combination to provide a snapshot into our minds and thoughts. Would you please proofread my sentences and share what you imagine when you look at the painting? Any help would be appreciated. Here are the words and the painting.

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Look at his resolution...Mad with the thought of death. Morning is a good time to prepare for the afterworld.
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I want to insert something but I don't know what. Would you please suggest something to fill in the gap or go in the space, please?
Look at his resolution ______________ Mad with the thought of death. Morning is a good time to prepare for the afterworld.
 
Perhaps:

He's mad with the thought of death.
 
Evening is a pretty good time for that too I guess.
 
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