A human skull, spicy, human eyes and lemon, ...

[Lu-cas]

Please correct my text.

A human skull, spicy, human eyes and lemon, such weird preparation but that’s how you were born. You pile of bones walking around the company building. Now you are alive make sure to keep your eyes and hear open and do not forget to connect your brain. In this game you have one job, pretty easy all you have to do is to decide who has to live and who has to die. Do not be cocky, you are not the only person working in this company, be careful and make the right decision. it is now your turn n°18.

 

[emsr2d2]

A human skull, spicy, human eyes and lemon, such weird preparation but that’s how you were born.

I have no idea what any of this means. What do lemons have to do with anything? What do you mean by "preparation"?

You are a pile of bones walking around the company building.

I've made my best guess at what you mean.

Now you are alive, make sure to keep your eyes and hear ears open and do not forget to connect your brain.

I've made corrections to the punctuation and to an individual word but I don't understand the sentence.

In this game you have one job. It's pretty easy. All you have to do is to decide who has to live and who has to die.

See above. You connected three separate sentences with commas. Study "comma splices".

Do not be cocky; you are not the only person working in this company. Be careful and make the right decision. It is now your turn, n° number 18 eighteen.

You had two more comma splices.
You failed to start the final sentence with a capital letter.
Write the word "number" in full.
We write the numbers twenty and lower in full in sentences like this.

I've done the best I can above, without having the faintest idea what your piece is about. Please explain the whole thing using simple English. Tell us who is supposed to be saying this and who they're saying it to.

 

[Lu-cas]

Ok, Thanks you. I'm wrinting a guesse game.

 

[emsr2d2]

Ok OK/Okay, thanks you. I'm wrinting writing a guesse guessing game.

At the start of a sentence, you can use "OK" or "Okay". Elsewhere in a sentence, you can use "OK" or "okay". However, "Ok" is always wrong.
It's "Thank you", not "Thanks you".
You should install an English spellchecker on your browser. It would have flagged up "wrinting" and "guesse" as spelling errors.
I assume you mean "a guessing game". However, I still don't understand. Who are you writing it for? Why are you doing it? What do people have to guess?

 

[Lu-cas]

At the start of a sentence, you can use "OK" or "Okay". Elsewhere in a sentence, you can use "OK" or "okay". However, "Ok" is always wrong.
It's "Thank you", not "Thanks you".
You should install an English spellchecker on your browser. It would have flagged up "wrinting" and "guesse" as spelling errors.
I assume you mean "a guessing game". However, I still don't understand. Who are you writing it for? Why are you doing it? What do people have to guess?

It's for my class, they need to geusse the name of the game ussing clues incide the texte.

 

[emsr2d2]

It's for my class. They need to geusse guess the name of the game ussing using clues incide inside the texte text.

Note my corrections above.
What class are you talking about? Are you a student in this class or are you trying to teach someone English?
Is it a game (a board game/video game?) that already exists and you're trying to get people to work out which game by describing it?

 

[Lu-cas]

Note my corrections above.
What class are you talking about? Are you a student in this class or are you trying to teach someone English?
Is it a game (a board game/video game?) that already exists and you're trying to get people to work out which game by describing it?

Yes, it's for my classmates

 

[emsr2d2]

Yes, it's for my classmates.

Is this an assignment from your English teacher?

 

[Lu-cas]

Is this an assignment from your English teacher?

Yes

 

[Rover_KE]

In that case, you're lucky to have received our help already, as this forum is not intended to help with students' homework or assignments.

Thread locked,

 

[emsr2d2]

@Lu-cas Your member profile (available to the moderators) shows that you accepted the forum's terms and rules on September 21, 2024 at 1.19pm (local time). Those rules clearly state that you are not allowed to ask for help with homework or assignments. Your very first post broke that rule!