A Malay Movie: Che Pak

[Gaya87]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Che Pak has been forced to resign from his tambourine dancer job, as his daughter Fifi opposes such a profession. Often ridiculed and embarrassed because of it, he then leaves his job to do a blue collar work in the field. When he receives an offer from a friend to relive the memory, he takes the job up without rethinking. However, will his daughter be able to accept his true passion? Will Che Pak be able to live his true passion ever?

Short summary
An ex-tambourine dancer, Che Pak, has been forced to resign as his daughter is often embarrassed by it. As he gets an offer to relive the memory, will it be a life-changing decision to live on his passion?

 

[teechar]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Che Pak has been forced to resign from his tambourine dancer job, as his daughter Fifi opposes such a profession. Often ridiculed and embarrassed because of it, he [STRIKE]then[/STRIKE] leaves his job to do blue-collar work in the field. When he receives an offer from a friend to relive the memory, he takes the job up without rethinking. However, will his daughter be able to accept his true passion? Will Che Pak be able to [STRIKE]live[/STRIKE] fulfill his true passion ever?

Short summary
An ex-tambourine dancer, Che Pak, has been forced to resign [STRIKE]as[/STRIKE] because of his daughter's [STRIKE]is often[/STRIKE] embarrassment about his profession. [STRIKE]ed by it. As[/STRIKE] He gets an offer to relive the memory, but will it be a life-changing decision to [STRIKE]live on[/STRIKE] fulfill his passion?

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