a new story

[Polyester]

Recently, I read a article about release the pressure if you have suffered from the work.
So, I wrote a sentence as follow. Is the following sentence correct and natural?

I want to release my pressure to my friends.


**I follow the instruction from all teacher here. I will write a story from what I read and post here.

 

[jutfrank]

No, please don't write a story, Polyester.

Focus on basic grammar and vocabulary for a few years before you attempt that. At the moment, your English is still at the elementary level, and you don't seem to be improving much. You really need to find a teacher to help you.

 

[Tarheel]

I am guessing you are talking about stress. The person you are talking about is under a lot of stress at work and hopes talking to his friends about it will be helpful.

Am I on the right track?

 

[Polyester]

I am guessing you are talking about stress. The person you are talking about is under a lot of stress at work and hopes talking to his friends about it will be helpful.

Am I on the right track?

Yes. What's wrong if you read my sentences and confusions?

 

[Tarheel]

Yes. What's wrong if you read my sentences and confusions?

I am guessing that you mean:

What is wrong with my sentences?

 

[Tarheel]

Recently, I read a article about release the pressure if you have suffered from the work.
So, I wrote a sentence as follow. Is the following sentence correct and natural?

I want to release my pressure to my friends.

None of that is right. Don't use any of it.
:-|

 

[Polyester]

None of that is right. Don't use any of it.
:-|

OK. I leave here. And I will focus on my basic grammar and learn how to build a essential sentence.
I write and post here for correction. That won't get the correct answer. I always make more and more mistakes at the same basic sentences.

 

[emsr2d2]

Recently, I read an article about how to release [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] pressure [STRIKE]if[/STRIKE] you [STRIKE]have suffered from[/STRIKE] might be experiencing [STRIKE]from the[/STRIKE] at work.

[STRIKE]So,[/STRIKE] I wrote [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] the following sentence. [STRIKE]as follow.[/STRIKE] Is [STRIKE]the following sentence[/STRIKE] it correct and natural?

I want to release my pressure to my friends. No, and I have no idea what you mean.

**I follow the [STRIKE]instruction[/STRIKE] advice [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] of all the teachers here. I will write a story [STRIKE]from what I read[/STRIKE] and post it here.

Yes. What's wrong if you read my sentences and confusions?
The underlined part is meaningless.

OK. I will leave here. Do you mean you're leaving the forum?

[STRIKE]And[/STRIKE] I will focus on [STRIKE]my[/STRIKE] basic grammar and learn how to build an essential sentence.
I don't think you understand what "essential" means.

I write and post sentences here for correction.

[STRIKE]That won't get the correct answer.[/STRIKE] Unfortunately, that is not helping me to improve.

I [STRIKE]always[/STRIKE] make more and more mistakes [STRIKE]at the same[/STRIKE] in basic sentences.

Please note my corrections (in red) and comments (in blue) above. You are definitely not ready to write a story of any kind. I suggest that you get a textbook (with exercises) for complete beginners and work through it from the beginning. I want you to study, using that book, every day for a month before you come back to the forum with any questions.

 

[Tarheel]

Polyester, I hope you will stop devising new phrases that make no sense. (Example: essential sentence.)
:-|

 

[Rover_KE]

Here's something else you should do, Polyester:

At the top of the page, click on Testing, then Quizzes. Read the instructions, than pick a topic to test yourself on.