A song about life (please, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics. this song too)

[Trace Vaon]

Hi,
this song is about life.
Please, Angels, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics, this song too
:angel:


Life taught me no matter how good you are
sooner or later you will cheat me
I will have to just see if forgiveness is the right way
I would not have to wait, I just want to know it now
I would not have to wait, I just want to know it…

Life has taught me that it would be good to have a living will
It is essential to be able to choose to be free until the end
All the history of human life has been - a struggle between
Wisdom, foolishness, honesty and cunning

you think that one of us - would go to join the ancient man?
What would you do - in case of unbearable hell?
wear the cloak - the fire is too hot
wear your suit until the end of the match

Life has taught me, no matter how greedy you are
Sooner or later you will help me
I'll just have to see if it will last long enough
I would not have to wait
I would not have to wait

 

[teechar]

Hi,
this song is about life.
Please, Angels, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics, this song too

Trace, have you paid attention to the corrections I made to your other posts? Did I leave the word "angels" in them? You also need to capitalize the start of every sentence and end the sentence with an appropriate punctuation mark. Click Edit to amend the above text in post #1. After you've done that, we'll be happy to look at your song lyrics.

 

[Trace Vaon]

Trace, have you paid attention to the corrections I made to your other posts? Did I leave the word "angels" in them? You also need to capitalize the start of every sentence and end the sentence with an appropriate punctuation mark. Click Edit to amend the above text in post #1. After you've done that, we'll be happy to look at your song lyrics.

Hi Teechar,

in the last thread "A Song about my granfather (help me to fix it, please)" in post #2 you corrected me in this way:

"
Hi,
This song is about my grandfather.

Please , Angels, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics. this song too
"

so I think I have to write :

Hi,
This song is about life.
Please, Angels, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics. this song too


Is it ok?

 

[teechar]

Hi Trace,
I meant to remove "Angels", and now I have. Please don't use it again!
Say, for example: "Please help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics of this song too".

In response to your post, I don't see any glaring mistakes in the lyrics.

 

[Trace Vaon]

Hi Trace,
I meant to remove "Angels", and now I have. Please don't use it again!
Say, for example: "Please help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics of this song too".

In response to your post, I don't see any glaring mistakes in the lyrics.

Hi Teechar,
I didn't understand it, I am sorry.
Now I got it.

I am very happy for my lyrics that were correct!

 

[Tarheel]

Wisdom, foolishness, honesty and cunning.

Better:

Wisdom, foolishness, honesty and deceit

Those are contrasting pairs. The word deceit is a better fit than cunning. (My opinion.)