A Taiwanese Movie, Mon Mon Mon Monsters

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Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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Shu-wei is a super nerd student who is a constant target for the school bullies, but he ends up joining forces with them when they encounter two demonic sisters who feast on human flesh in the middle of the night. The gang manage to capture one and relentlessly tortures the creature but the other demon is angry and starts killing anyone wearing a school uniform. They begin a sadistic game, which ultimately leads to disastrous consequences.

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A group of high school students capture a mysterious monster and proceed to torture it in various ways for their own amusement, which soon ultimately leads to disastrous consequences.
 
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They begin a sadistic game..
I would write: A sadistic game ensues..
 

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The words "soon" and "ultimately" don't go together.
 
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