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[Polyester]

Is the following sentence correct and natural?

80% products account for 20% profits in total. We wont see that company was surviving on the market.

 

[tedmc]

80% products account for 20% profits in total.
The sentence cannot be understood. 80% of the products?

We wont see that company was surviving on the market.
We don't see the company surviving in the market.

 

[emsr2d2]

[STRIKE]Is[/STRIKE] Are the following sentences correct and natural?

80% products account for 20% profits in total. We wont see that company was surviving on the market.

You wrote two sentences for us to look at. You must learn to recognise this.

 

[Polyester]

You wrote two sentences for us to look at. You must learn to recognise this.

OK. I ask one question. Is it correct?
80% products account for 20% profits in total.

 

[Polyester]

OK. Is it correct now?
80% of products account for 20% of profits in total.

 

[GoesStation]

OK. Is it correct now?
80% of products account for 20% of profits in total.

It's okay. You don't need the last two words.

 

[tedmc]

OK. Is it correct now?
80% of products account for 20% of profits in total.

Does that apply to all products? Shouldn't there be a definte article?