[Grammar] After listening carefully to both opinions

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"After listening carefully to both opinions, the leader of the band rose from his chair.-Quite boys. I am aware that for too long we have not specified anything. But I must tell you that the wait has paid off, since recently I was contacted by a person who is quite interested in our services."

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

I don't know what you mean by "Quite boys" or "we have not specified anything".

 

[Raymott]

I suspect it means: "After listening carefully to both opinions, the leader of the band rose from his chair, and said 'Quiet boys. I am aware ...'"
I'm also not sure about the other bit.

 

[Nikitus]

Dear emsr2d2 and Raymott:

First of all, thanks for your help.

I tried to write the following:


"After listening carefully to both opinions, the leader of the band rose from his chair.-Don't worry boys. I am aware that for too long we haven't do anything. But I must tell you that the wait has paid off, since recently I was contacted by a person who is quite interested in our services."

(His colleagues were worried about the bad performance of the company)

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

After listening carefully to both opinions, the leader of the band rose from his chair. "Don't worry boys. I am aware that for too long we haven't done anything. But I must tell you that the wait has paid off, since recently I was contacted by a person who is quite interested in our services."

(His colleagues were worried about the bad performance of the company.)

Thanks.

See above.

Are you talking about a band or a company?

 

[Tdol]

How about both sides?

 

[Nikitus]

Dear emsr2d2:

Sorry, it was my mistake. I am talking about a company.