Nikitus
Senior Member
- Joined
- Oct 4, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Chile
- Current Location
- Chile
Hello.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"After she parked her car in a place near the big house where the leadership course would be held, Kelly walked determinedly toward the big house. Once she entered through the front door, she looked for a few minutes to big painting at the entrance of the house.
After observing it with detention, she noticed that the painting was inspired by a landscape of Southern Chile. After that, his gaze settled on the large number of guests who had arrived at the leadership course, where some were checking their cell phones sitting and isolated from the real world, while others had a pleasant conversation.
Chloe, Jim and Vinny were talking. Kelly approached to the group. She asked a Chloe, 39 years old, brunette woman, if she could join the group."
Thanks.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"After she parked her car in a place near the big house where the leadership course would be held, Kelly walked determinedly toward the big house. Once she entered through the front door, she looked for a few minutes to big painting at the entrance of the house.
After observing it with detention, she noticed that the painting was inspired by a landscape of Southern Chile. After that, his gaze settled on the large number of guests who had arrived at the leadership course, where some were checking their cell phones sitting and isolated from the real world, while others had a pleasant conversation.
Chloe, Jim and Vinny were talking. Kelly approached to the group. She asked a Chloe, 39 years old, brunette woman, if she could join the group."
Thanks.
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