elvis93
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Good afternoon guys!
Would you please correct my literary essay and evaluate it in a scale of 0(minimum) to 100(maximum) ?
I would be really glad if you evaluate it by respecting the following evatuation criteria:
a)content
b)organisation and cohesion
c)range
d)appropriacy of register and format
e)target reader
The level of the exam is FCE(First Certificate of English= upper-intermediate level)
Thank you in advance!
Requirements of the essay: Reading of the novel “Pride and Prejudice” by Jane Austen
ESSAY TOPIC : “Compare the characters of Mr and Mrs Bennet and say whether you think they've a good marriage or not”.
Words limits : 120-180 words
Although Mr and Mrs Bennet are not the protagonists of Jane Austen's “Pride and Prejudice”, they are both described psychologically in the first chapter of the novel.
In the opening, Austen describes the dialogues of the married couple with such an incredible realism and irony that the couple arguments seem to be extracted by a film scene.
Mr Bennet is a self-controlled and good-tempered man who usually uses lively and sarcastic humour. His favourite daughter is Elizabeth and he appreciates her for her intelligence.
His wife, Mrs Bennet, is a chatty, gossipy, impulsive and uneducated woman who's completely incapable of understanding his husband's irony and subtlety of speech and keeps on indulging in romantic speculations about their daughters' futures.
The relationship between Bennets is more likely to be based upon respect and tolerance rather than love, passion and complicity, which should be the roots of an ideal matrimony.
According to Daniel Defoe's “Moll Flanders”, marriage was just a commercial contract in the eighteenth century, “carrying on business, and Love had no share, or but very little, in the matter”.
Bennets' marriage is conform to all the marriages of that time but it does not conciliate with the modern definition of a “good” marriage not because of the couple incompatibility,but for the lack of the virtues, previously quoted.
Would you please correct my literary essay and evaluate it in a scale of 0(minimum) to 100(maximum) ?
I would be really glad if you evaluate it by respecting the following evatuation criteria:
a)content
b)organisation and cohesion
c)range
d)appropriacy of register and format
e)target reader
The level of the exam is FCE(First Certificate of English= upper-intermediate level)
Thank you in advance!
Requirements of the essay: Reading of the novel “Pride and Prejudice” by Jane Austen
ESSAY TOPIC : “Compare the characters of Mr and Mrs Bennet and say whether you think they've a good marriage or not”.
Words limits : 120-180 words
Although Mr and Mrs Bennet are not the protagonists of Jane Austen's “Pride and Prejudice”, they are both described psychologically in the first chapter of the novel.
In the opening, Austen describes the dialogues of the married couple with such an incredible realism and irony that the couple arguments seem to be extracted by a film scene.
Mr Bennet is a self-controlled and good-tempered man who usually uses lively and sarcastic humour. His favourite daughter is Elizabeth and he appreciates her for her intelligence.
His wife, Mrs Bennet, is a chatty, gossipy, impulsive and uneducated woman who's completely incapable of understanding his husband's irony and subtlety of speech and keeps on indulging in romantic speculations about their daughters' futures.
The relationship between Bennets is more likely to be based upon respect and tolerance rather than love, passion and complicity, which should be the roots of an ideal matrimony.
According to Daniel Defoe's “Moll Flanders”, marriage was just a commercial contract in the eighteenth century, “carrying on business, and Love had no share, or but very little, in the matter”.
Bennets' marriage is conform to all the marriages of that time but it does not conciliate with the modern definition of a “good” marriage not because of the couple incompatibility,but for the lack of the virtues, previously quoted.
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