and his pale brown hair grew down-from high

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and his pale brown hair grew down-from high
flat temples-in a point on his forehead.
Where did his hair grow?

The Maltese Falcon, by Samuel Dashiell Hammett, page one
 
"... and his pale brown hair grew down - from high flat temples - in a point on his forehead."
Where did his hair grow?

Source: The Maltese Falcon, by Samuel Dashiell Hammett, page one p. 1
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I do not see how it is possible for any hair to grow this way.
 
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