Andy Hill was fuming after he saw

[Bassim]

Have I made any mistakes?

Andy Hill was fuming after he saw the adaptation of his novel. He had spent more than two years writing it, putting so much effort and energy into it, but the film studio had used his novel to produce a Hollywood hotchpotch, turning the book's main ideas on its head. He wowed that the next time he published a new book, he would also write a scrip and direct the film to preserve the gist of it. He was only hoping to be able to raise enough funds for its production.

 

[teechar]

Have I made any mistakes?

Andy Hill was fuming after he saw the adaptation of his novel. He had spent more than two years writing it, putting so much effort and energy into it, but the film studio had used his novel to produce a Hollywood hotchpotch, turning the book's main ideas on its head. He wowed that the next time he published a new book, he would also write a scrip and direct the film to preserve the gist of it. He was only hoping to be able to raise enough funds for its production.

I've underlined where to make changes.

 

[Bassim]

I believe the changes should be following.

1. turning the book's main ideas on their heads
2. He vowed that the next time he published a book, he would also write a film script and direct the film to preserve the gist of it. He only hoped to be able to raise enough funds for its production.