apology? apology?

[optimistic pessimist]

Dear all,

I'm going to forgive her. Not unless she expresses her deepest [apology, apologies].

In the sentence above, should "apology" be plural?

Thank you!

OP

 

[SoothingDave]

Yes, but "...not unless she apologizes" would be more natural.

 

[5jj]

Even more natural would be to begin with, "I'm not going to forgive her".

 

[BobK]

:up: ... followed by 'however much she apologizes'.

I'm reminded of Rex Harrison:

I will never take her back -
If she were crawling on her knees
Let her promise to atone
Let her shiver, let her moan -
I will slam the door and let the hell-cat freeze.

(As I remember he slipped between the indicative and the conditional more-or-less randomly!)

b