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[rohanvora]

Please highlight the grammatical mistakes in the following application which I've to post on fb for an administrative spot.


I apply for the administrative position but i don't want wasting time by reasoning my eligibility and capabilities as I see a countably less number of approaches. So it's seemingly easy a task of churning out the one among this countable a number of applicants. But I assure you that I'll devotedly do my share of work where need be, without a twinge of hesitance.



Many thanks before hand. :-D

 

[rohanvora]

Re: plz help!

man why am i always left unanswered? should I envisage this website to be of no use?

 

[5jj]

Re: plz help!

man why am i always left unanswered? should I envisage this website to be of no use?

If you come up with that sort of complaint because you haven't received a response just 26 minutes after posting your request, people are going to be in no hurry to help you.

 

[rohanvora]

okay then please you hlp because I'm to post it asap.

 

[5jj]

I am applying for the administrative position, but [STRIKE]i[/STRIKE] I [STRIKE]don't[/STRIKE] do not want to wast[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE]e time by [STRIKE]reasoning[/STRIKE] discussing my eligibility and capabilities as I see a countably less number of approaches. So it's seemingly easy a task of churning out the one among this countable a number of applicants. But I assure you that I'll devotedly do my share of work where need be, without [STRIKE]a twinge of[/STRIKE] any [STRIKE]hesitance[/STRIKE] hesitation.

I am afraid I don't really understand what you are trying to say in the two parts I have underlined.

You asked us to highlight the mistakes in grammar, not the style, but I have to say that the overall impression given by your application is that you cannot be bothered to send in a proper application and that, if appointed, you'll work when you have to. I feel that this approach is unlikely to attract a positive response.

 

[rohanvora]

thank you so much