Are these sentences grammatically correct?

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Please note that the following items have been returned back to us by the supplier on [date]. These were returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these were not dealt with our requirement in time as per the site requirements.
 
Please note that the following items have been returned back to us by the supplier on [date]. These were returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these were not dealt with our requirement in time as per the site requirements.

Please note that the following items were returned to us by the supplier on [date]. These had been returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these were not dealt with our requirement in time as per the site requirements.
The part in red doesn't make sense.
 
Thank you very much for your help. Can I write as follows?

Please note that the following items were returned to us by the supplier on [date]. These had been returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these items were not meet to our requirement even though they didn't supply it on time as per the request.
 
Thank you very much for your help. Can I write as follows?

Please note that the following items were returned to us by the supplier on [date]. These had been returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these items were not meet to our requirement even though they didn't supply it on time as per the request.

No, it's still not clear.
 
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