[Grammar] Are these two sentences grammatically correct?

[Ika Gotsiridze]

1. I am writing to to recommend "name" "surname" for admission in this Exchange Program.

2. I am pleased to recommend one of my best students, "name" "surname", into your exchange program.


Thanks in Advance

 

[Tdol]

1. I am writing to to recommend "name" "surname" for admission to this Exchange Program.

2. I am pleased to recommend one of my best students, "name" "surname" for your exchange program.

Why the capital letters in the first?

 

[emsr2d2]

Thanks in advance. [strike][/strike]

In addition to Tdol's comments and questions, please note my amendments to your (unnecessary) final sentence. There was no need to capitalise "advance". You omitted the full stop at the end. You tried to make your own emoticon/smiley - please don't do that. You can click on the button in the toolbar and select one.

There is no need to put "Thanks in advance" at the end of any post. For all you know, you might get no responses or you might get responses that you are not grateful for. Of course, we hope that neither of those things happen but, at any rate, wait until you see the responses and then, if appropriate, click the Like button to show your gratitude.

 

[Ika Gotsiridze]

There is no need to put "Thanks in advance" at the end of any post. For all you know, you might get no responses or you might get responses that you are not grateful for.

I think if I write "Thanks" beforehand there is more chance that someone will reply my question.
P.S thank you for your advice.

 

[Ika Gotsiridze]

thanks for your help

 

[emsr2d2]

I think if I write "Thanks" beforehand there is more chance that someone will reply to my question.

That's not right.

 

[Ika Gotsiridze]

Why the capital letters in the first?

I just made a mistake, in my letter I wrote them with small letters.
Thanks for your help

 

[Ika Gotsiridze]

That's not right.

but in my cases it worked properly

 

[Rover_KE]

Thanks for your help. [STRIKE][/STRIKE]

You should reread what ems told you in post #3:

You omitted the full stop at the end. You tried to make your own emoticon/smiley - please don't do that. You can click on the button in the toolbar and select one.


Additionally, there is no need to write a new post to say thank you. Simply click the Like button on any posts you find helpful. It means that we don't have to open the thread again to read your new post and then find that it doesn't include any new information or an additional question.