middleage S
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As a result, they produce fewer hormones that promote hair growth, and it leads to hair loss.
As a result, they produce fewer hormones that promote hair growth, which leads to hair loss.
I wrote the above sentence myself. Is it okay to change 'and it' to 'which' ?
As a result, they produce fewer hormones that promote hair growth, which leads to hair loss.
I wrote the above sentence myself. Is it okay to change 'and it' to 'which' ?