[General] As I mentioned you please find the list of not available beverage list attached

[susitha]

kindly check for me below grammar mistakes

As I mentioned you please find the list of not available item (beverage) list attached. Some of the items not available last few month and I have remove them from the list. kindly check this matter and update accordingly.

 

[billmcd]

kindly check for me below grammar mistakes

As I mentioned [STRIKE] you [/STRIKE] previously, please find the list of [STRIKE] not [/STRIKE] non-available items (beverages) [STRIKE] list [/STRIKE] attached. Some of the items have not been available for the last few months and I have removed them from the list. Kindly [STRIKE] check [/STRIKE] review this matter and update accordingly.

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[emsr2d2]

Kindly check for grammar mistakes [strike]me[/strike] in the sentences below. [strike]grammar mistakes[/strike]

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