back to the real world

[alpacinou]

Is this good?

I played the last four years of our relationship in my head like a slow-motion video and couldn't find anything that I could have done that would have prevented Jane from leaving me. Memories clashed and burned. I figured there is not much point in blaming myself now. Instead, I tried to revel in the memory of our good days. The ringing of my phone pulled back into the real world. Why does reality always intrude on my daydreams?

 

[Tarheel]

Is this any good?

Never mind that! Do you have more?


Memories clashed and burned.

I didn't know that was possible before, but now I do.

 

[alpacinou]

Is this any good?

Never mind that!

I'm not sure what to make of that. :-?

Does the paragraph have any problems? Do you think it can be made better?

 

[Tarheel]

I'm not sure what to make of that. :-?

Does the paragraph have any problems? Do you think it can be made better?

I was trying for humor there. Sorry.

It looks good enough to me.