Broken

[PRD2021]

1. There were many broken crystal components in the Chandelier supplied.
2. There were many crystal components broken in the Chandelier supplied.

Would please tell me which sentence is grammatically correct?

 

[Tarheel]

Try:

There were many broken crystal components in the chandelier.

 

[Barque]

Would please tell me which sentence is grammatically correct?

Both, but there's no need to capitalise "chandelier". It's neither a proper noun nor the first word of the sentence.

But they sound stiff because of the word "supplied" at the end. Try it without "supplied", as Tarheel suggests.

Or: Many crystal components in the chandelier were broken.

 

[emsr2d2]

If you're reporting a problem with a delivery, I'd go with the simpler "The chandelier was broken when it arrived". You would then back that statement up with photos.