[Grammar] Business Communication Letter

Nelle20

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Kindly help me revise this using the 7 C’s of business communication. It’s for my english requirement. Thank you.

Dear Ms xxx:
It's my intention to request you to schedule a meeting between the two of us in the foreseeable future in order that we can hold a discussion as regards the ugly effects of the abrupt, drastic, or speedy merging among the Philip-life plans and the Filipino life plans. For your information maybe you have all ready heard that a great deal of people in the general public specifically the chairmen and the salesmen of both the companies are apprehensive of the fatal consequences of the merging to our subsidiary companies as well as to our manpower services in Japan.
I want a schedule that will gonna coincide with my usual weekend visit to your workplace.
 
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