Can you correct this request please?

[dilodi83]

COULD YOU CORRECT THIS REQUEST PLEASE?

Dear colleagues,

I'd like to cancel the request of my inter-library loan I asked for.
I'll be waiting for a reply of yours.

Best Regards

THANKS VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE.

 

[corum]

COULD YOU CORRECT THIS REQUEST PLEASE?

Dear colleagues,

I'd like to cancel the request of my inter-library loan I asked for.
I'll be waiting for a reply of yours.

Best Regards

THANKS VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE.

I am writing to inform you that I would like to withdraw my claim for an inter-library loan.
I look forward to your reply.

 

[mayita1usa]

Dear colleagues,

I'd like to cancel the request of my inter-library loan I asked for.
I'll be waiting for a reply of yours.

A briefer option:

I would like to cancel my request for an inter-library loan.
I look forward to your reply.